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مُساهمة  imaddd في الجمعة يوليو 13, 2012 9:46 am

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله تعالى وبركاته
جئت لكم بمشهدين مقتطفين من سيناريو أشتغل عليه حاليا. وهو سيناريو لقصة أمريكية وبشكل ونظرة أمريكية لانني من ذوي الذين لهم اطلاعات ورؤى غربية أكثر من الاهتمام بالكتابة العربية. لن أطول عليكم أرجو ان ينال اعجابكم وسأكون ممنونا اذا لاحظتم بعض الاخطاء التي أغفلت عنها. وشكرا.


9) Ext. Garden. Afternoon
Eve stops, a man sitting in a garden, turns his backbone and giving food to the birds. in front of him there is a fountain, water is so cool. the fountain has a structure of a romanian woman. the camera shows the specefics zone in this statue.

cut to.

10) Ext. nearby the Garden. Afternoon

Eve getting outside the car. she sees him..

Eve
Edward?

Edward turns at the sound, shocking but still happy

Edward
Eve !! oh my god there's much time I haven't see you

Eve closing the car's door, going towards him laughing

Eve
Oh yeah, day's gone and we're not as we were.!

Edward is standing up while she's walked to him, they greets themselves by kissing each others

Edward
putting the same parfum ?!

Eve
Why should I change it?

Eve smile. setting together near each other, the both looking at themselves trying to find some secret in their eyes. the camera don't leave watching them together. then shots to eve's eye, and her face.

Eve
Edward you still as you were, wow

Edward
Why should I change myself?

Eve
Haha Maybe you should've done it before, not now

Edward
Oh Eve, I remember ....

He's seeing in front of him, the camera shows them setting, and then shots to his face.

Eve
Remember what?

Edward
Remember our days at school, at faculty

Eve seems like she's nervous, she stop looking at him and seeing forward too, at the fountain, together is looking forward themselves, Edward continue

Edward
Our first kiss, our real love,

Eve
Oh my god do you still remember this bullshit it's just a moment, a such period had gone, and it doesn't still exist

Edward looking at her

Edward
I know ... I know !

Eve looking at him, asks him interestingly

Eve
tell me? what you did all this years ago?

Edward
I become a lawyer

Eve
WoW so interesting, have you been married?

Edward
Oh no, I don't think of this right now

Eve
You're right, I married, and I'm ashamed

Edward
Why?

Eve looks at him.

cut to.
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imaddd
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